Style is a tricky thing to discuss, and probably the most subjective section of this guide. What that means, in practical terms, is that you can ignore any advice given here, if you so choose. However, it's still full of things which are good ideas to take into account; bendable rules which, if you know how to use, will serve you well and spice up your story. Some of it might just be refreshers from your English classes, but at least I won't give you a work sheet.
Everything else here I just couldn't figure out where to put.